This assignment though? I don’t really like how it turned out. My main goal with the final draft was to find a way to improve the conclusion. And while I did alter it, I’m not sure it’s entirely “good” enough to warrant being proud of. I just could never find a good way that accurately ended my paper that felt right to me.
If there is one assignment I come back to, it’s going to be this one. I like how the other assignments turned out. Even if I don’t love them, I still like them and would certainly direct people to them if they ever looked at my blog. But for some reason, this assignment never quite clicked for me. Maybe it was because the original was so personal to me that I never felt I could do it justice… maybe it was something else. Whatever the case, I intend to come back to this assignment at some point when I can really sit down and just focus on what I want to say so I can say it right. Normally, that happens easily for me over the course of revisions. This time, however, that wasn’t the case and I realized that this assignment is going to require a lot of dedication and change for me to be satisfied with the end result.
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