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After reading multiple peer-reviews and meeting with Raymond in regards to my re-purposed essay, I felt prepared to make the appropriate changes to my essay.\u00a0 The feedback was constant in terms of my strengths and weaknesses. Overall, it was articulated that my essay was not appropriate for any other kind of assignment.\u00a0 This was the goal of the paper, so I was pleased with this feedback.\u00a0 The piece that I repurposed was an essay for Communications 102 about political advertising.\u00a0 My re-purposed was a \u201cwalk through\u201d of my original essay, and incorporated feedback that my GSI gave me.<\/h4>\n

My revision took this a step further, and added an analysis and summary at the end of the paper.\u00a0 This summary explained why I was so disappointed with the assignment, and what else I hoped to get out of it but unfortunately did not.\u00a0 Mainly, I focused on the disgust that I felt towards the topic of politics in general.\u00a0 I claimed that this assignment further confused me on my feelings of disgust: was it towards politics or political advertising? After writing this paper, I am still unsure of the answer.<\/h4>\n

This paper was unique in the sense that my revisions only took place at the very end of the paper.\u00a0 Usually I would have had to do a lot more re-working in every aspect of the paper, but the feedback that I received assured me that I took the correct approach.\u00a0 As much disgust that I feel towards the assignment and paper that I produced, I am also grateful for the opportunity to examine it with a critical eye.\u00a0 It is not often that I revisit past assignments and discuss what I did and did not like about it.\u00a0 Writing a paper like this was an interesting learning experience, but was surprisingly natural.\u00a0 I felt like my voice was very present throughout the paper, which is unfortunately rare in past papers that I have written.<\/h4>\n"}