Draft 2

Draft 2

Draft 2

In this draft, I attempted to reorder my thoughts in the first draft into a somewhat more logical order. Towards the end of my first draft, I started to lose my structure and put down whatever came into my head. I reordered some paragraphs in this draft, as well as adding a visual aid for my first paragraph to help the readers envision what I experienced as a child.

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