Draft 1

All You Got Was a Ring Draft 1

All You Got Was a Ring Draft 1

For this initial draft, I decided to give some structure to the journal entries with little excerpts of her sister’s thoughts. Because my main character suffers from schizophrenia, I felt that readers might be somewhat confused by some of her delusions without another character who could explain the delusions further.

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